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Dream Spiral
By behind these eyes on 03/02/2006
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Written by Pilgrimage  (3/16/2006 3:34:01 PM)

I enjoyd this one, it seemed peaceful. You end your next to the last stanza with a period, but I think it should be a comma because the sentence continues on the next line.


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Written by behind these eyes  (3/16/2006 6:22:07 PM)

I am glad you enjoyed this one, though I am one that usually does not put any punctuation in the right places though. I just enjoy writing don't do it for anything else other than pleasure. Thanks again for the comment.

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