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The Storm
By Unknown Member on 03/05/2006
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Great poem, 

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Written by Evan  (3/12/2006 10:39:43 AM)


Great poem, 

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Written by Evan  (3/12/2006 10:45:54 AM)

full of powerful images of strength and pain. I think as you reread this, you may want to adjust the last few lines a little, to smooth the flow.
Really good poem.
And it is a little easier on the eyes if you use a smaller font, with no bold, that's kind of a picky criticism from an older person..., and then again, wouldn't "The Storm" logically be bold and shocking...,


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