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If Two Mutes Met
By scarsnstories on 03/09/2006
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Written by Barbara  (3/24/2006 7:25:00 PM)

I like this poem. The title does a lot of the work for what is to follow. The line "system check," kind of takes me away from the rest of it. The rest is quite sensual and smoothly soothing, while that line seems a little technical and electronic to me. Very good use of language. I hope I've given you something to think about. Emily

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Written by westcoastmama  (4/6/2006 11:08:48 AM)

I like the way you delivered this piece. The imagery is excellent. ~Mary


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