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By Rival on 03/10/2006
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Written by jch_dark  (3/11/2006 12:37:56 PM)

Can it be expanded ? I enjoy it as it is but can see more. Perhaps as an opening to a larger work itself. Just a suggestion is all.


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Written by Rival  (3/23/2006 8:06:26 PM)

thank you for your coments...
i think the flow of the piece stops there... while abruptly and aggresively, it seemed to fit the feeling well...

also, i have kindof fallen in love with the short and to the point writtings...
although i am curious if you had anything in mind... would love to see

short and 

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Written by Uni  (4/8/2006 6:49:36 PM)

to the point. Sleepless night. Can't seem to write. No poem tonight. Thanks I enjoyed. ~Uni~

great job 

Written by llanth  (6/28/2008 2:50:15 AM)

i loved this poem, it reminds me of when writers get writer block, so u inspired to next the next time i have block i'll write a poem about nothing thanks heres a five

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