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By betty on 03/27/2006
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Written by dfresh  (5/23/2006 12:19:57 PM)

I would suggest breaking this up into lines, instead of one block, and checking the spelling on a lot of it (its=it's, id=I'd, your=you're). It would make it a lot easier to read, and so a lot easier to review. The idea of constant faithfulness/waiting is a good one, just work it out some.

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