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How do I know?
By sweet-n-sassy on 04/14/2006
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We've all been there. . . . 

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Written by MikeC16958  (4/15/2006 12:29:26 AM)

You may want to try this format for appearance:

How do I know
what I am feeling is true?
And how would I know
if you felt the same
as I do?

How can I just keep
this all inside?
Why are my emotions
on this roller coaster ride?

I need to tell you some thing
but I don't know how to do it.
See that chair over there
please grab it and please sit.

I really don't know how to say this
but I will give it a shot.
I hope this is not to much for you
I don't want you to feel
like I put you in the spot.

I know it has only been
about five or so months.
You have already
pulled a few stunts.

Well here goes nothing
"I think I am falling
in love with you",

No please don't leave.
Cant you see I am wearing
my heart on my sleeve.

Great now I have gone and
blown it and now your gone for good.
Maybe the feelings I was having
were just simply misunderstood

Thank you 

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Written by sweet-n-sassy  (4/15/2006 11:08:03 AM)

Thank you for the little hint but you never said anything about the poem it's self but I do thank you for the hint.
sweet-n-sassy

I like it! 


Written by sweet-n-sassy  (4/15/2006 10:19:11 PM)

You have no fear in showing vulnerability at it's best. Many try to hide it or disguise it with other emotions and you say here I am and this is how I truely feel, even if you fear the worst may happen especially in matters of love. I respect that alot! And If he can see your feelings are true I really don't think he'd walk away! Well done!

I like it 


Written by karizmaticvoice  (4/15/2006 10:22:45 PM)

Girl when you borrow my computer sign out after your done!!! You have no fear in showing vulnerability at it's best. Many try to hide it or disguise it with other emotions and you say here I am and this is how I truely feel, even if you fear the worst may happen especially in matters of love. I respect that alot! And If he can see your feelings are true I really don't think he'd walk away! Well done!




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