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Perfect Blue
By laser on 04/23/2006
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hi 

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Written by dfresh  (6/14/2006 10:53:22 AM)

Hmm, good way to describe them without ever mentioning the eyes, just talking about their power. A couple of nits: "taring" is tearing? And "their" should be there.

Thanks 

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Written by laser  (6/15/2006 12:53:06 AM)

lol, I am really bad at spelling. So anytime you see a miss spelled word tell me please, thank you.


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