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By poe43 on 04/23/2006
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Written by Uni  (4/24/2006 1:07:44 AM)

Nice idea behind the words. Keep up the good work and the words will flow easily for you. ~Uni~

great job! 

Written by karizmaticvoice  (5/8/2006 1:02:38 AM)

I really liked this one, it took a couple times for me to read it for it to sink in...But I have to say it is beautiful.


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Written by jewel  (5/8/2006 5:21:34 PM)

I am a little confused. It seems you want your freedom yet you are asking this person not to say goodbye and then you are asking for a helping hand for when you leave. Is it that you want to be with this person but they do not give you the freedom to be yourself?


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Written by poe43  (5/8/2006 8:31:06 PM)

To settle the confusion, I wrote this when I was moving away from my parent's I wanted to be on my own and have my freedoms but I still wanted them there for me at the same time.

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