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Put You In Me
By vernewel@yahoo.com on 05/01/2006
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Written by julesbristol  (5/1/2006 12:29:23 PM)

I'm afraid I'm not into this. You need to sack the style entirely I think. a) put it into some sort of poetic form and b) consider writing without rhymes so you can find your own meaning and message. It reads like a pop song at present.


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