Free Poetry Contest
Have Some Love
(5/29/2006 10:07:08 AM)
I liked this poem. I loved the rhyming and playfullness of your words. But it would have been more effective in lines and stanza's. And perhaps omit some of the me's.
Comfort, nurture, rock me like a baby. Watch as I grow.
All the me's are not necessary.
Job well done though!
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