Poet & Writing Community Poet Community
About Publish FAQ's Bookstore Free Poetry Contest
MoonTownCafe Home for Poets


  Search

Advanced Search
MoonTownCafe Home My Cafe Write Poems, Stories, and more Publish your Poems, Stories and Book My Friends on this Site Log-in
  Poetry & Writing ForumsFree Poetry ContestJournal

Read Reviews



Have Some Love
By vernewel@yahoo.com on 05/17/2006
Viewed: 651
Reviews: 1
Rating:

Sweet 


Written by jewel  (5/29/2006 10:07:08 AM)

I liked this poem. I loved the rhyming and playfullness of your words. But it would have been more effective in lines and stanza's. And perhaps omit some of the me's.

Comfort, nurture, rock me like a baby. Watch as I grow.

All the me's are not necessary.

Job well done though!


Read User Reviews
Write Review
Report Poem

Add To Friend

Send To Friend
The Best Online Poem and Writing Community for all
 Members
   Username
Forgot Username?

Password
Forgot Password?
Not a member?
Sign up for free!

Premium Membership

  Newsletter

  Enter your email:
  Site Stats     Online members:1      Online guests:32      Total Users:23882      Total Poems:62962
© 2000-2016 MoonTownCafe.com. All rights reserved. LinksLink to UsPoet LinksContactPrivacy