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For Celine 2003
By Kiwiheart on 05/18/2006
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Written by Krista  (9/9/2007 9:57:22 AM)

Omg, this poem is soo sad. It made me even more upset because your beginning to it is so relatable. I pictured myself sitting listening to music then it got sadder and sadder, I am sooo sorry if this is a real life ordeal for you! I couldn't even imagine what it's like, but you have written a beautiful piece of work, congratulations


Written by spiderm49  (9/22/2007 12:52:04 PM)

The best kind of beauty 

Written by gingerbreadandcream  (10/2/2007 9:03:55 PM)

You poem had the best kind of beauty I've ever known a bittersweet kind of beauty that is a little sadder than it is happy. I clearly saw you with the coffee and te tin of peaches...and a notepad at ur lap..Subtle and sad.


Written by poet7376  (11/18/2007 7:25:38 AM)


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Written by slimjim  (11/28/2007 1:11:24 PM)


Written by LOVLEY101  (1/24/2008 11:34:53 AM)

I like this poem because you gave a lot of details and thats what you need to hear in a poem.



Written by irishgirl  (1/29/2008 1:10:23 PM)

I really enjoyed reading this. I am very sorry about your mother and your daughter it must of been a very sad time for you. you expressed that well here. Just because shes not your blood doesnt mean shes not your daughter. Shes going to go out someday and look for a husband just like her "daddy", just like you.
You made it clear you were still going to be her dad and that was brave. This was very emotional poem. I loved it


Written by Alaina  (1/29/2008 5:09:29 PM)

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