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Voices
By Tortured Soul on 05/28/2006
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Written by Eco_de_lluvia  (5/28/2006 11:40:37 AM)

Actually the first line is pretty bad.

-and ...
-and ...

the structure could really use some help

"just existing
without existing"

"just" works in very few poems and existing without existing is a bit cliché

eco

 


Written by dandycky26  (6/19/2006 1:08:46 AM)

very good

 

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Written by dapharoah69  (6/19/2006 9:51:26 AM)

Very vividly beautiful poem, I am so inspired y your gentle gift. Keep it up!!

 

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Written by wickedhart  (6/21/2006 12:27:28 PM)

I found this to be very interesting......

LIA 


Written by LIA  (12/24/2006 5:25:21 PM)

THATS HOW I FEEL AT THIS VERY MOMENT


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