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The one I hate to love
By LonelySoul on 05/30/2006
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THE ONE I HATE TO LOVE 


Written by MUSEconnieHUES  (5/30/2006 10:31:43 PM)

YOU ADDRESS YOUR POEM TO SOMEONE BUT IN THE LAST VERSE YOU SWITCH TO:
Pain she's caused me,
I can never forgive;
But I'll love her,
Long as I live.

I SUGGEST YOU CHANGE IT TO:
Pain YOU'VE caused me,
I can never forgive;
But I'll love YOU,
Long as I live.

I WOULD LIKE TO SEE THE RHYME BECOME LESS CURT. A PLEASANT POEM NEVERTHELESS.
LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER
MUSEconnieHUES
A PARTIALLY BLIND POET


This was me a while ago! 

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Written by andy  (6/4/2006 2:09:26 AM)

You sum up the pain of a broken relationship superbly! This was how I felt when my last relationship hit the dirt!!

I hope that she's long gone now and you're onto better times!

Peace!
Andy


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