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The World....
By XbrokenX_0612 on 07/07/2006
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hi Jamie... 

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Written by westcoastmama  (7/11/2006 12:51:20 AM)

you have a wonderful beginning here. It ended somewhat abruptly. With a little more work this can be magnificent :-) I can't wait to read more of you. Welcome to Moontown. ~Mary


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Written by XbrokenX_0612  (7/11/2006 12:10:29 PM)

thank you for your wonderful thoughts and comments, Your opinion really does help, thank


Written by Diego  (1/4/2007 10:30:26 PM)

I thought this was a very interesting poem. It's very good as it is, but I would love it if you added more. I think a lot more could be said. But it's completely brilliant. I loved it!

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