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last dream
By dandycky26 on 08/22/2006
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Something's missing 


Written by maggieb  (9/12/2006 9:54:52 AM)

As I read this piece, I stopped,went back and re-read it over and over and I think you have the basis of a wonderful piece, however something is missing- it needs fleshed out , giving the reader more detail as to what the poem is about. It flows well but lacks just what it is - love - broken heart - lost dreams - etc. I would really like to see this piece reworked.


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