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Where Have I Gone
By brilliant_beatnik on 10/06/2006
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Reviews: 23


Written by Juli28  (10/6/2006 10:31:24 PM)

Your poem breaks my heart! Which means you are good at putting your emotions into words, that can touch people. I wrote a similar poem called beautiful on the outside, which is also in this forum.

Great job! 

Written by Matthew2  (10/7/2006 5:12:00 PM)

keep up the great art work! Take care....

where have i gone 

Written by ivory bacon  (10/24/2006 4:10:00 PM)

a couple of snaps and a few hits to the bongo drums,
yeah,like you got it babe, letting the truth be known,we're all trying to find that answer to "where have i gone"


Written by kiabunch  (10/26/2006 5:39:30 PM)

This was very sad, and yet I could relate to what you were saying, thank you.

where have i gone 

Written by lollybear  (7/31/2007 4:39:30 PM)

a very frightening place to be. very well expressed. thank you for sharing


Written by LostMemories  (7/31/2007 11:32:30 PM)

I love the feeling that this poem envokes. It brings me back to a different time in my life. Thanks so much for sharing.


Written by spiderm49  (9/22/2007 12:49:59 PM)


Written by mybiteistrue  (10/9/2007 10:43:59 PM)

this deserves a better overall rating.
i think some of the rhyming sounded forced, while other times it worked out really well. i understand it.
it's good.


Written by Biggus  (11/21/2007 6:40:45 AM)


Written by f4egirl  (11/21/2007 6:07:28 PM)

nice work i've felt that way before

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