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By princesscoco on 10/20/2006
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ahh!! 


Written by alachamberlain147  (10/21/2006 10:32:46 AM)

best love poem by far!! . . .

 


Written by PRCLEVELAND  (10/23/2006 9:36:42 PM)

It is okay but seems to need more to it. Not bad for maybe the start of a poem but still seems like it could use an ending.

 


Written by f4egirl  (11/11/2007 10:40:36 PM)

i like this poem..the only thing i could suggest is a little more organization..not all poetry needs to be organized..but i think this one could use it

 


Written by Unmanifested_One  (11/12/2007 4:16:29 AM)

It seems that your thoughts are in the right place, you just need to quote them more poetically. Try using stanzas to separate certain lines from others, this will make it easier for you to make a beginning, middle, and end.


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