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Wanting to Know
By jillybean on 11/05/2006
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Written by Sabre  (11/5/2006 9:29:01 AM)

Being myself a sometimes yo-yo man, and slightly introverted and aloof - I really enjoyed this poem. Is it intrigue? Glimmer curiosity? Love? Fear of an empty green couch? I don't know.

To the point - the phrasing flowed well - and I got a little peep into the speaker in the poem.

PS with tenderness:
I'm also persnickety I've been told
Suggest "cannot" for "can not": "annihilation" for "annihalation" unless that "ha " interjected in the middle is a joke I didn't catch.



 

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Written by Sabre  (11/8/2006 10:12:26 PM)





 


Written by mandalorian  (4/16/2007 2:29:18 AM)

good job

 


Written by wickedhart  (4/16/2007 10:32:58 AM)

Wow......what can I say? An amazing write...:)


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