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The Flute Player
By wickedhart on 11/06/2006
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Critique of "The Flute Player" 

Written by toolofmusic  (11/6/2006 3:53:20 PM)

It was a little too long, and was seriously lacking in abstract visuals. Perhaps it was too literal, but it would be better if you approached the story from another perspective, and harness a more natural vocabulary that arouses the senses.


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Written by wickedhart  (1/24/2007 10:47:49 AM)

Thank you for the comment....

hello ... 

Written by walterego  (5/20/2007 8:47:37 PM)


I am .. 

Written by Sabre  (5/20/2007 8:54:02 PM)

in accordance with Walterego.


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