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Love With Respect
By linda mosley on 11/15/2006
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Written by Shurugutahn  (11/17/2006 3:23:47 PM)

Thanks for your comments, thought I could return the favour: Well, I really like the image you put across to the reader, but maybe you could get rid of the first comma after the 'I' because I don't think it's neccesary, no offense or anything it just bugs me because I pause a bit at that time when I feel it should flow on until you use the second comma after 'respect' :)


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