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"Just one more sip of Love to taste"
By Soulfade the Ghost on 12/14/2006
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Written by Persephone Rose  (12/15/2006 12:14:00 AM)

this one seems a leap inthe right direction. the tempo was much easier to follow. i definately love the word choice on the title, and the repetition. good job

 

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Written by ElenaChavela  (12/15/2006 9:26:58 PM)

Hey - thanks for the compliment.

I like your style. You have a gift for conveying messages very well, but it needs some refining (believe me, mine do too). Your poems read so much like journal entries or something. I don't know, that's very unique and it seems to get the point across but it seems to me that you should narrow down your words and stuff. Use fewer words and strengthen the ones you have. Just keep writing and that will happen.

 


Written by attiya3  (12/18/2006 10:14:40 PM)

wonderful job.Seem you are good at handling words.
Doesn't look like a scary ghost but an innocent one.


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