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A Bottle of Gin
By GoneCrazy7 on 12/17/2006
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The flow was excellent... 


Written by Soulfade the Ghost  (12/19/2006 10:21:08 AM)

I wish that didn't pull on my heart strings...but goddamn does it ever. You locked the reader in with that rhyming, self questioning poetry that all too many people miss out on. I think this peice is from the soul, and found at the bottom of an empty bottle. I f you know what I mean.
Not to make light of it, but that was expression from the truest resevoir...pain.

Sincerely,
Soulfade The Ghost

 

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Written by l0nnieugene  (12/21/2006 9:19:12 PM)

Kristin, even if you had pink champagne your think campaign would have the same end result: the answers aint in that bottle @its top or bottom!

i suggest you try bottled water, sober up & find a new love who wont have you playing the guessing or blame game.

Sure you cry when you say goodbye but eventually as i've said b4 what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, much stronger.

Your poem certainly conveys the pain you feel from the loss. it will/was obviously hard 2get over.


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