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What A Hole Leaves
By MikeC16958 on 12/17/2006
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Written by l0nnieugene  (12/18/2006 9:06:29 PM)

Mike, is she really that transparent? Has she no substance @ all xcept4 costumes & shadows & shades of pretense? If she were a bee it seems that she would sting...unless i'm missin' somethin


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Written by MikeC16958  (12/19/2006 12:12:41 AM)

Not transparent, but yet, all sizzle and no steak.

Aspects will always remain shrouded in mystery as is the case with most everything; I was trying to reduce "the leaving" to something I could understand.

There comes a time when you realize two-way streets aren't so two way and the plate techtonics of relationships will sometimes preclude new landmasses from forming because the irresistable force shifts immovable, resolute objects away from each other.

"I won't walk away from you" ~RINGS~ in my ears and all I can do now is watch the very pneumatic, ethereal and rather hurtful butterfly fly away - the very thing, that I believe as erstwhile and symblolic cacoon, I helped to nurture and metamorphasize into whatever she is now. And vice versa.

So I describe it. . . .

Albeit superficially, but I describe it.

And the more I wrote this for someone, it too, symblized my departure and me, as well.


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Written by l0nnieugene  (12/19/2006 12:59:12 AM)

thanx4the explanation. i would be remiss if i did not tell yout that your response has morphed my must. You'll soon read the result of that process. that was a 'heavy' reply. i understand.


Written by LostMemories  (8/13/2007 1:15:33 AM)

This piece speaks worlds to me...I wish you all the best man.

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