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By LIA on 12/22/2006
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Written by Persephone Rose  (12/22/2006 8:04:37 PM)

this poem is very good, the only change i might suggest, is the second stanza, first line, remove the word and, and replace it with a comma, then your sylables will be more in line. other than that, hats off i loved it.


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Written by l0nnieugene  (12/23/2006 1:58:14 AM)

When i read Your poems i become preoccupied with content over style since You seem 2have an obession with death, dying & prayer. i hope You start emphasizing the latter over the former. Think of death as by invitation only & somehow You never made the guest list.


Written by MARQUESARJ30  (12/29/2006 7:55:20 PM)


Written by BentSpoon  (12/29/2006 9:06:50 PM)

I love your style. Keep up the good work. This had a strong meaning to it.


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Written by ceridwen_megan  (12/29/2006 10:03:41 PM)

That was wonderful dear heart keep up the good work.


Written by LIA  (1/1/2007 7:15:12 PM)

my pain

Nice job 

Written by Unknown Member  (1/1/2007 10:15:32 PM)

I really liked this. It flowed. Good job!

Spoken clearly! 

Written by Heidis_Consignment  (1/1/2007 11:53:19 PM)


Written by rosie  (1/13/2007 8:13:32 PM)


Written by neenee  (1/21/2007 5:18:18 PM)

please, i hope you have not let your pass hurt so bad, for i know from similar issues have tried to get to me i refuse to let it run my life for now i'm doing much better, then before. for i once was like you, but i now have better outlook on life.

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