Written by brit_harper08 (1/5/2007 7:10:29 PM)
||I WAS THE FIRST TO READ IT!!! haha...:)
Becca girl...Im really sorry for your loss...
you have written an incredible piece of work here...I told you when I read it after school that it was AWESOME!
I loves yous girl!
Written by J-Ma (1/6/2007 1:36:11 AM)
Written by MandyParshall (1/6/2007 11:21:34 PM)
||This poem made me cry... the thought behind it and the dedication is very touching. And the poem itself is very well written and expressive.
5 stars for the idea
5 stars for the rhythm
5 stars for you as a poet and all your incredible work.
Written by donk92 (1/7/2007 5:40:35 AM)
||hard to write
hard to read
easy to feel
hard to forget
anyone can write, but what makes it art is when you can feel what the writer felt as you read it,
i could almost taste the tears and sense the loss but still the verse is a statement not a plea for sympathy that is the important thing,
every time somebody feels as you do whilst reading this, keenen gets just a little older altough the box he came in is no longer here, the fact that its been here is un changeable.