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By LIA on 01/10/2007
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Reviews: 10


Written by Persephone Rose  (1/10/2007 11:56:40 PM)

this was a very good storyline. the lines felt a bit more like sentences. it needs a few marks of punctuation to allow the total affect to take hold. sin embargo, me gusta mucho.


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Written by who187  (1/11/2007 10:03:04 AM)

scary story, kind of steven kingish, your a very good writer why not write something sweeter so we can see your true essence.


Written by J-Ma  (1/11/2007 6:29:48 PM)

you are a very good writer but you really scare me if this is really you. It is so evil but Ill read more from you to see if this is the truth


Written by LIA  (1/11/2007 9:41:25 PM)



Written by donk92  (1/11/2007 10:18:09 PM)

i have a dark dark past
i too would love to think my heart is ice
if that were so we wouldn't write as we do
pete's weakness and insecurities may have been what you thrived on but they were HIS weaknesses and not something you gave him

i await with a morbid sense of anticipation part 3


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Written by ceridwen_megan  (1/14/2007 4:30:09 PM)

Here is were I have to say Bloody Hell thats good! Smashingly written!!!Imagrey was good.

Okie dokie then 

Written by Slow Cheetah  (1/16/2007 2:12:57 AM)

Well I can't say that I exactly love the subject matter all though anyone who has been badly hurt does want to hurt something back sometimes. Lyrically it's good, and over all had a good flow. Good work.


Written by neenee  (1/21/2007 4:44:41 PM)

ok this was a little to realistic for i hope this is fiction, god knows if it isn't. i hope you doing better and this is a form of argue mangement.

p.s. these peoms do catch your eye..


Written by WILL G  (1/25/2007 1:26:56 PM)

OK Lia, I must admit as far as shock value goes you hit it on the nose, great follow up to part 1. I can't remember right now but just incase I forgot to rate it part 1 got a 5 too. Now let's move on to something mystical!


Written by rainy_d  (2/19/2007 1:04:36 AM)

these misery saga's are very interesting.
thankyou for the reviews my dear.
i would like to chat sometime.
are you on msn messenger?
if so add me to your contacts and say hello sometime.
my sign in is 'cutie_pie'.
hope to hear from you.
good work again

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