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a fantasy waiting
By Persephone Rose on 01/19/2007
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woh ... 


Written by Sabre  (1/20/2007 10:05:20 AM)

intense!

 


Written by neenee  (1/21/2007 5:43:17 PM)

what woman doesn't go through something similar? we all do at least in our life.

 


Written by Broken Piecess  (2/26/2007 6:56:58 PM)

Definitly intense! This could make for a song. I think you captured the cruel side of what this can lead to. You have a heaviness in this poem. A reality only some know. A truth girls can see in a new form. Stanza 12, line three...I get a little lost in that line? What does it refer to? Really intense


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