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"Never miss your Queen until she's not yours"
By Soulfade the Ghost on 01/23/2007
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Written by Pollyanna  (1/24/2007 5:22:59 AM)

What a beautiful poem..you are a compliment to words..Polly


Written by InspiredMind  (1/29/2007 8:18:43 PM)

I really liked this one - reminds me of the night when I met with one of my ex boyfriends after not seeing him for 9 years. We're currently now together! ;-) hehehe

I like the whole idea that you based this one on, however, I do have one complaint - the alliteration gets a little thick in the middle and gets a bit overwhelming - kinda bogged me down as I was trying to wade through it. Alliteration is good and as with all things - is best if used in moderation. (Although I know, it could just be my own personal preference speaking also. hehehe :-) Keep up the good work!


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Written by Jovana_cv  (2/7/2007 10:39:02 AM)

thats abosolutely amazing!


Written by attiya3  (2/23/2007 8:03:15 PM)

i like reading it.


Written by Orvas  (11/2/2007 12:46:44 PM)

God, I'm a sucker for alliteration. Probably because I've never been really talented at employing it myself. Sounds great, looks great, and has a message that's completely universal (well, to those over the age of 13, generally)

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