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Guilty Conscience
By emotional rollacoaster on 01/30/2007
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Written by wickedhart  (1/31/2007 10:58:25 AM)

I really liked reading this. I think the rhyme is good, but if I might offer a suggestion? Maybe if you broke it into stanzas or lines it might be a lttle easier to read? Just a suggestion......

 

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Written by emotional rollacoaster  (2/2/2007 3:53:13 PM)

Thank you for the suggestion. I've changed my work to a stanza format. It does read smoother.


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