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Circle of Pain
By Persephone Rose on 01/30/2007
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Nice but needed some more body.... 


Written by Soulfade the Ghost  (1/31/2007 1:52:07 AM)

I liked this peice alot, but the narrative...to me...seemed almost forced in the pattern you were using. Some more free formed body and less rep would have been nice...but nonetheless a great peice....
Just my opinion....from the side of the Rose...The Ghost whispers.....

Soulfade

Great Job! 


Written by RMClapper  (1/31/2007 7:14:52 AM)

Your poem shows alot of emotions of the circle of life. Take care.....

Very sad 


Written by Ka-Tinuum  (2/26/2007 4:27:14 AM)

And very hopeful I had mixed emotions on this one. Good though.

 

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Written by attiya3  (2/28/2007 7:06:37 PM)

It seems so real and emotional.very nice attempt.

 

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Written by Divind_Promises18  (3/12/2007 8:42:31 PM)

I enjoyed reading this piece because it explains a real-life situation that happened in many many places. Keep writing=]


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