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INNOCENCE LOST
By POONIE on 02/04/2007
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Written by dehnora  (2/6/2007 9:09:38 AM)

I think that it would be a little easier to feel the flow of this piece if you wrote it line by line instead of in one block. It takes away a little from the emotion because the reader really has to try to figure out what is the begining of a stanza and the end of one.

dehnora 

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Written by POONIE  (2/6/2007 10:44:21 PM)

thank u for your input i am kinda new at this and u r right about the poem should have been written line by line and again thank you for your comment

SO SAD 


Written by rainy_d  (2/17/2007 11:27:59 PM)

I RATED YOU BECAUSE THIS IS OBVIOUSLY AN EXPERIENCE THAT, IF NOT YOU, SOMEONE YOU KNOW WENT THROUGH.
ITS SAD, BUT REAL. AND I ALWAYS ACKNOWLEDGE REAL, NO MATTER WHAT THE CASE. SO, GOOD JOB, EXPRESSING THESE MOMENTS WITH WORDS.

SOUNDS FAMMILIAR TO MY OWN STORY 


Written by LIA  (2/18/2007 8:56:15 PM)

BRAVA THE EMOTION WAS THERE


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