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HER LIFE
By LIA on 02/07/2007
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Written by dehnora  (2/8/2007 7:34:42 AM)

I love the ending, it is raw emotion and then a bang at the end, great

HER LIFE IS MINE 


Written by LIA  (2/8/2007 7:15:00 PM)


 


Written by jkrice40  (2/8/2007 10:22:08 PM)

i love it! i love the whole flow of the poem it just kind of roles off your tounge. you deffinetly deserve 5 for this one. great job!

 


Written by maggieb  (2/11/2007 9:24:34 AM)

Well done!

HI AGAIN 


Written by rainy_d  (2/17/2007 11:21:05 PM)

I HAVE TO COMMENT ON ALL YOUR POEMS. I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND.
YOU HAVE A TALENT SWEETHEART. YOU JUST NEED SOMEONE REAL IN YOUR LIFE.
(DON'T WORRY I'M NOT HITTING ON YOU)

ITS REAL TALK THOUGH.
YOU JUST NEED GENUINE LOVE.
GOOD WORK THOUGH, REGARDLESS.

 


Written by Persephone Rose  (2/21/2007 5:42:40 PM)

a few of the rhyms felt forced. for example
Being others and not knowing herself,
Putting her needs on a shelf;

there are some grammatical mistakes, but other than that i liked it a lot and can feel what you are saying.

 

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Written by adventure  (6/13/2007 10:39:54 AM)

wow...this is so true


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