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By The.student on 02/19/2007
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Written by wickedhart  (2/20/2007 9:53:17 AM)

I really like this. I like the way the words flow. Very nice.....

Beautiful 

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Written by Chino_Star  (5/11/2007 12:31:16 AM)

It's a beautifully sad

wakeup 


Written by reals  (5/11/2007 9:08:21 AM)

you got more in,man,wakeup!

 


Written by littlepoet89  (5/11/2007 9:28:57 AM)

I don't like it when we come to realize there is no ending...i really enjoyed your poem!!

 


Written by Prototype  (5/17/2007 1:55:05 PM)

good poem like the fake smile-plastic mask, i guess everyone do the :D face too much these days

 


Written by MonnVoolvif  (5/20/2007 5:16:27 AM)

great poem
its just wow!!
keep writing
may the force be with you

 


Written by Confused  (5/20/2007 7:40:36 PM)

I *really* like it. Good work, and nice imagery !

I remember when you started to write poems 


Written by Poetic.memory  (6/5/2007 5:17:56 PM)

and i always listened

i love them
they are from the heart, body, and soul

domo arigato ausa-san fo being you

 


Written by gwizardstar  (6/6/2007 9:23:35 AM)

totally enjoyed this poem.
I love short poems that say alot and this one certainly did.Excellent.

Ausa-sama 

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Written by Poetic.memory  (6/6/2007 1:36:16 PM)

Hai, Good Good
it is vary particular how you put the words meleody and forgotten in the very first phrase very very well
i loved the way you did this


nice


-cheeri-o
tata
chow
-....oh sorry ...bye!!!
-Ookami
Tol!!
lets dance............Stop!!!
<(^.^<)........(>^.^)>


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