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By mshafferty on 02/22/2007
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Written by sunsetrose  (3/1/2007 2:02:16 AM)



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Written by Persephone Rose  (3/21/2007 5:24:43 PM)

the first thing i would recommend is go back through and read the poem alloud, then add and subtract the necessary punctuation.

That is something that should make you happy
to go with the lengths of the lines it may come off more smoothly as

that something should make you happy.

there are a few ather grammatical errors with the verbs.

this one didnt quite strike me how your other one did, but you cant please everyone everytime. keep up the good work.

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