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I think
By gently*collapsing on 03/05/2007
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got me worried 

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Written by dnice  (3/5/2007 7:48:09 PM)

the feelings of self destruction come across very strong in the poem..is Plip Plop connected to this poem?

 


Written by Gemini_91  (4/8/2008 11:04:39 PM)

love how u wrote ur emotions...

*Ladii S*

 


Written by rachelle1165  (4/9/2008 7:48:39 AM)


 


Written by poggles  (4/9/2008 9:16:09 AM)

awww
You write your emotions really well, it comes across strongly. I also love that I could see where the poem was going before it got there, it shows you make it flow really well.

just one thing i'd change, your line 'i think im almost dead' I would change to 'i think i am almost dead' because it improves the rhythm when you try to read the poem out loud :)


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