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President Bush
By The.student on 03/07/2007
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Written by Persephone Rose  (3/14/2007 3:17:01 PM)

from someone whos brother is in the us army, i would have to disagree with some of what you say. but that is why it is america, and this is about poetry, not personal view. having said that.

Tears from children you dont know
innocent women and mens cries
and while your on a T.V. show
Million more dies

this was your strongest stanza.


Written by gently*collapsing  (3/15/2007 8:23:46 PM)

i love your poem and i totally agree. oil isnt worth it. why can't we find or make something better? and one of my friends just joined the air force, so i feel what your saying about all that die. its a strong poem and i respect you for expressing your views on a website like this


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Written by Zyskandar A. Jaimot  (3/18/2007 1:40:55 PM)

to The.student - if you 'really' wish to move readers/the public with your opinions/thoughts(your present premise i completely disagree with) i would suggest reading examples of discourse issued by writers of the past - SWIFT comes to mind as does GINSBERG in his poetry and others - they were not 'just' mouthing popular current thought but allowed wit/sardonic humor to make their points - no you should 'not write' like them but 'study' how they drafted their arguements against the status quo - regards zaj

yuk...i love it though 

Written by Poetic.memory  (6/5/2007 5:18:50 PM)

So true
i hate bush too!

XP anti-bush

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