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HER WARM EMBRACE AND KISS
By MelloYello on 03/08/2007
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mellow! 

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Written by blogetry  (3/13/2007 6:37:21 AM)


True love MAYBE, but really just a dream.... 


Written by MelloYello  (3/22/2007 1:58:21 AM)

Personal, dark, loving, and a dream for sure.

Seems like there are many emotions floating around, as well as, a lot of contemplation about what one should do about a deep love for someone special.

Maybe a little dramatic..But, also very to the point.

Could add more adjectives, and metaphors, and lot more poetic skill such as using bigger words...

However, I like it because its real!!!!!!!!!


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