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"Without You"
By sunsetrose on 03/18/2007
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Written by Holliday  (3/20/2007 6:47:59 PM)

"The times we had the good and the bad"
that line doesn't fit too well. i think it should be taken out or changed a bit. and the last line "again" i think should also be taken out. but other than that everything sounds right. i really did like it. good job!!!!

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