Written by morlep (4/18/2007 8:55:23 AM)
||You know, i think the sadder thing sometimes, is not that we die but we survive. The world gets sick we go on, this hardy species that can't control its hunger.
I'm only saying this because you poem made me think. That's how good it is. Well done.
Written by Sabre (4/18/2007 8:28:56 PM)
||things seem like were running out of time and hopefully we can right this ship called Earth and hopefully you're not a cassandra. Maybe just a pepperoni pizza at bedtime?
Good poem. Happy Earth Day!
Written by barbsdad2003 (5/5/2007 11:03:17 AM)
||... nice, very clever, quite smart.
I like this particular work of art.
Although 'tis sunny outside right
now, and I must, sadly, depart.
But ... before I do,
I leave this for you:
I think you mean farewell
when you wrote fair well;
and I think you meant hellhounds
when you penned hell hounds.