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VERY SENSUAL POEM
By UncomfortablyNumb on 04/25/2007
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Written by mandalorian  (4/25/2007 1:17:11 PM)

'nuff said

 

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Written by Zyskandar A. Jaimot  (4/25/2007 10:06:00 PM)

to uncimfortablynumb - your last couple of posts all of them ARE VERY WELL WRITTEM VERY READABLE VERY ACCESSIBLE AND YOU SEEM TO HAVE FOUND YOURSELF IN A SEMI-STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS STYLE OF STORY-TELLING WHICH WORKS VERY WELL FOR YOU - KUDOS AND CONGRATS (this is not to say/write that they do not to be cleaned-up ever so slightly) AND YOU HAVE FOUND YOUR SONG AND IT IS VERY INTERESTING this is a message that all of us should strive for/to sincere regards zaj

Nice 


Written by BentSpoon  (6/19/2007 11:50:08 AM)

I like how this is more of a remembered tale, versus a poem. It makes it better, because if you would have tried to rhyme this or set some form of structure, I beleive that it would have taken away from it. Good Job.


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