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CakeWalk
By l0nnieugene on 05/07/2007
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Your on fire!!!! 


Written by Soulfade the Ghost  (10/15/2007 9:01:05 AM)

I like this one extremely. The wordplay and metaphorical connection to goodies and ...well...."goodies"....if u catch me is rather excellent. And sadly....As a man, I know most of us do that. And it is a shame. But this poem is brilliant. I wonder...if you could contact me and tell me maybe a little bit about where you were mentally when you wrote this.
Also, to my fellow poets on moon town, start showing some love to someone ahead of there time.
Beginnings of excellence !!!!!

LONG LIVE THE CATACLYSM!!!!
GREAT JOB
STG

CakeWalk 

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Written by l0nnieugene  (10/15/2007 1:08:23 PM)

Believe me, if i knew how i would contact you 4thwith. i appreciate you taking the time 2read& review my work. i want2 read more of yours.

loved 


Written by blogetry  (1/11/2008 4:14:05 PM)

the brilliant wordplay and message for the deceitful players....well done!
r u in the pastry business? :-)
regards,
b

 

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Written by l0nnieugene  (2/6/2008 11:26:43 AM)

Blogetry, if by pastry you mean am i n2 things tasty the answer is a resounding 'yes.' If, however, you mean if it is my occupation, the answer is 'nno.' i am a lawyer by training. In any & all capacities that i may be n2 i thank you 4taking the time 2read & respond 2my word work.


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