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Artifical Death.
By The girl with the thorn in her side on 05/10/2007
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I'm not a huge fan of free verse but... 

Written by Slow Cheetah  (5/14/2007 5:13:45 AM)

This poem is an exception, it just reminds me of the full gamut of emotion involved with love. Also he title makes me think of being dead on your feet which I can relate to lol. Good work, if I had to add a complaint it would be that it didn't rhyme : P

i dont do titles 

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Written by thedeadfreak  (6/28/2007 3:41:49 PM)

deadly , dangerously awesome! but you know pete wentz wrtote the book the boy with the thorn in his side right? i love pete wentz! just a random thought anyway...great poetic urges


Written by Aileen  (7/6/2007 11:42:49 PM)


Written by bekkidear08  (8/27/2007 11:39:26 PM)

has wonderful imagry. i love it. very unique. how very unique

Artificial Death 

Written by dracegannon  (12/3/2007 1:35:05 PM)

Wow. I feel great empathy reading this superbly written poem, with voice, tone and clarity. The imagery is fabulous! Poem stays cohesive from beginning to end. Poem feels like a Romeo & Juliet piece.

Poem takes you through a timeless dimension of passion and pain, of an artificial death. No matter what form it takes, death is a part of life.

The passion and commitment in this piece gives it a true love story quality. Indeed, I give it high mark for excellence an craftsmanship. Please stop by to read some poetry and tell a friend. Keep sharing.



Written by rachelle1165  (1/25/2008 11:24:05 PM)

and highly ontelligent

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