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I Weep
By spadassin on 05/11/2007
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Written by Dirlowhirl  (5/11/2007 9:24:43 PM)

This was just beautiful. It just flowed so well, it was lovely. Thanks.


Written by reals  (5/12/2007 3:07:40 PM)

sweet poem!


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Written by Itsuwari  (5/12/2007 11:01:15 PM)

Simply beautiful, I wish I could write with such unmitigated purety. I loved it, it flowed perfectly and left a great aftertaste, you should check out some of my work on www.poetrypoem.com/moonlitblood, I would love to know what you think. You are a great poet, continue to write and share your gift with the rest of us.



Written by Prototype  (5/13/2007 4:21:56 PM)

Very Good!
The poem is full of emotion and feelings, and I like the Hope as a dream component.


Written by beterTHNsuuperman  (5/13/2007 7:21:37 PM)

"thee" ?


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Written by Prototype  (5/14/2007 6:28:34 AM)

Thee (pronoun)
The objective case of thou: With this ring, I thee wed. I shall bring thee a mighty army.
can't you read a dictionary beterTHNsuuperman?

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