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Love Gaps
By Prototype on 05/15/2007
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Written by MonnVoolvif  (5/18/2007 4:24:09 PM)

i understand that they are a happy cople and is a beautiful story
keep writing
may the force be with you

cool 


Written by bluepearl  (5/31/2007 6:50:30 PM)

nice and sweet.keep up the good work

Awesome thoughts... 


Written by mommyof2  (6/8/2007 5:33:38 AM)

The poem expresses a great deal of love and affection, and flows quite nicely. It's moving and portrays a beautiful night.One thing I noticed that may need some fine tuning is the grammar, but considering English isn't your first language, that's totally understandable. I think the key to poetry is the ability to paint a vivid picture of what your trying to express, and have the reader "feel" what you're trying to say...and THAT you do very well! A few grammatical errors can be easily fixed. I have some suggestions if you're interested.

thanks 

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Written by Prototype  (6/11/2007 6:10:45 PM)

i just wanna thank you all for review this poem, thanks for the support!
i'm particularly thankful for mommyof2 help and suggestions.

thank you all!

:) 


Written by dcvz  (7/21/2007 9:36:31 AM)

Good poem I like your thoughts in this one :)

 


Written by EssenceQueen  (7/23/2007 5:39:30 PM)

Nice:)


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