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Last Night
By reals on 05/18/2007
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Written by twilight_lover  (5/20/2007 11:06:17 AM)


 


Written by Confused  (5/20/2007 7:38:49 PM)

Nice idea !

But it would be much better without the typos and with some capitalization (at least for the "I"s).

The first three lines are weaker that the rest, it's a pity because it's the opening and it gives the first impression on your piece of work.
Which is filled with clever images !

 


Written by mandalorian  (5/26/2007 12:52:22 AM)

I suffer from mild insomnia...but please believe that someone out there cares. If you think hard enough you will come up with someone.


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