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Touch Me
By Persephone Rose on 06/06/2007
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Written by gwizardstar  (6/6/2007 9:17:49 AM)

not bad

 


Written by evilangel18  (7/3/2007 4:31:14 PM)

I do'nt know why you were only rated a two when you deserve a five. I think it's beautiful.

 

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Written by Aileen  (7/6/2007 11:55:13 PM)

You have to let someone in to see you, or they will break in and see the side of you you don't want them to see, not yet, or not ever, they will one day see that side of you. And when they do, if they love you, they will break down those walls for you, and will love every part of you, as much as you love every part of them.

You have captured my soul in your words 


Written by LIA  (8/4/2007 2:09:31 PM)

Brava Brava

me 


Written by the_final_act  (8/4/2007 4:42:40 PM)

this is me in every word, ttly been there thanks for posting

I had a ... 


Written by Sabre  (10/7/2007 2:48:17 PM)

copy of I Am A Rock by S&G hanging at work - my protection against being hurt again. I always build walls, a preemptive attempt to keep my guard up. But the mortar slowly crumbles and I find that I long to be touched again. Nice work.

Sabre

Touch Me 


Written by edwardhartman  (10/9/2007 3:06:21 PM)

You have a nice poem here, but the repetitions
make it drag. Tighten it up.

 


Written by rachelle1165  (2/1/2008 9:36:13 PM)



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