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A Married Man
By maraki on 06/13/2007
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Written by adventure  (6/13/2007 10:35:25 AM)

this is so true, and it works both ways

 


Written by InnerSasuke-Kun  (5/16/2008 3:51:59 PM)

It was very deep and I could really feel what you were trying to put into the poem. I loved it very much.

fuck 


Written by duchess  (5/16/2008 4:36:23 PM)



pardon me for cursing.

this packs a punch.
kapow! in the end.

way to tell it like you see it.

d!

great poem! 


Written by rachelle1165  (5/16/2008 9:10:37 PM)

so true...

=] 


Written by thedeadfreak  (5/25/2008 12:51:32 AM)

nice.

 

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Written by Crazyjed  (5/28/2008 12:28:06 PM)

So true. Loved the structre. It gave it sort of a wispy ambience(sP?).

 


Written by aacrey  (6/18/2008 12:37:16 AM)

I think in some places you are straining for rhymes. The best advice I try to give is to read the poem aloud and see if there are better words that fit the poem and make it flow more smoothly.


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