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The Shepherd Dog
By Clandestine on 08/16/2007
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Poetry is fluid 

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Written by Davidjroth2002  (8/16/2007 7:09:37 PM)

and because it is, you can always 'fix' what doesn't work - especially when you can come back to it years later and view it through objective eyes.

I'd concentrate on the end, where you got stuck in the brother/other/another/other/other rut.

Fix that and this will be very good.

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