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without you
By ajulieti on 09/05/2007
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Meh 


Written by Orvas  (9/6/2007 11:47:29 AM)

Good overall poem. Keeps a theme and doesn't lack for much. The overall mood stays the same throughout the poem, which is fine, yet not difficult to do, and I can relate to the emotions. Could flow a little better with the transitions, and besides, I'm a bit of a grammar, punctuation and capitalization fanatic. Good job nonetheless.

 


Written by spiderm49  (9/7/2007 8:43:14 PM)



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