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SAY I LOVE YOU
By orman5 on 09/25/2007
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Very Hallmark 


Written by Vintaris  (9/25/2007 5:21:18 PM)

It is not that it is bad, nor is it good. These five minute poems are just bland and thoughtless in my opinion.

the line
show me your charm, and I will "beguile"
doesn't really make sense to the rest of the poem
basically you are saying charm me and I will decieve you into liking me. It is rather a harsh word for the fluffiness of the poem itself.


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